Omgee's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario is Lazy]

Not bad!

I liked this! Your animation was smooth, for the most part, although sometimes the font on the word balloons was a little hard to read -- especially when the words were small. Also, it was just a little short.

Otherwise, the story was amusing, and I voted to protect. Good job.

Skutieos109 responds:

Thanks. :)

[Shake!]

Awesome!

That was poetic. Beautiful. Stunning. Incredible. All the critics shall rave.

A couple of things that brought down the overall score:

1. It was a little short. I know that it was intended to be a test, but it was too *good* to be a test -- but it should've been longer.

2. A preloader and a replay button would've been nice -- or at least a code to loop it back to the beginning of the segment instead of to the first frame. Just a little touch that shows you care.

Otherwise, I really did like this, and I hope you'll use this sequence in a full-length if you don't expand this as a short.

[Tribute to BBQ]

Heh.

You are my hero. That was hilarious. Great song, an appropriate joke, and overall an excellent tribute to an excellent flash artist.

Loved the penguin, by the way.

5/5, 10/10.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Thanks :)

[Bbq-ish 100th movie]

Congratulations!

Congratulations on your 100th movie on Newgrounds. Excellent, as always, and although fart jokes are a little overdone, I think farting is a perfect way to celebrate this momentous occasion.

Fifened with great pleasure.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

I also celebrate my birthday by farting.

[Orphan Cookie ):]

Heh.

That was really funny, and I liked the facial expressions you used. I wish you'd animated it a bit more; you'd get a much better score in general, but for making me laugh out loud, I give you the gift of 5/5.

I like your sense of humour. Now go make something longer this time, and *animate* more. :)

[One man tutorial]

It's decent...

First off, and I'm echoing Marcato's sentiments here as well, please don't ask for special treatment based on your age. When you submitted your flash, you agreed to this:

"You understand that by clicking "SUBMIT" you represent and warrant to Newgrounds that you are of the age of eighteen (18) years or older on and that all of the biographical information relating to yourself is truthful."

So, if you're not 18, it might be wise to be quiet about it, and let your flash stand on its own merits.

That said, your flash looked decent. My biggest suggestion to you is use a spell checker before you post a tutorial that's heavily dependent on text. You had many, many spelling and grammar errors, and that makes your flash look sloppy.

Otherwise, this was a good start. I think you could add some more items to it and make it a little more comprehensive, but for a first submission, this wasn't bad.

Now go develop your flash skills some more and impress us with your next movie!