Omgee's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paragon 2]

Really funny!

Hah, what a funny collection of mini music videos! Nice graphics on some, less nice on others, but great ideas on pretty much all of them! Some hilarious skits in there... the milkshake one and the very last one were the best. Perfect.

I do wish you'd listed the songs you used in the credits, because there were a couple that I didn't recognize and liked. Good variety musically, anyway. Ha, nice two-second Richard Cheese spot!

I hope you do another one of these. Spend some more time on your graphics and you'll be on the front page in no time!

(Responses are always appreciated!)

MrBallistic responds:

oh, well which songs were there? Send me a note.

[FFA Short #1]

Hilarious!

That was really funny. Loved the tinsel beast and the discovery of the Atari 2600 (two-bits of fun!). The intro was really well done, too; it had the look and feel of a professionally-done television cartoon. Well-scripted and funny lines throughout, and -- for the most part -- solid, quality animation.

My biggest problem was with the sound quality. The sound got loud and scratchy at times, and I could hear the *poof* from your breath hitting the microphone. Also, the frames where they grabbed the games seemed cheaply done compared to the rest of the film.

Otherwise, everything was perfect, and if you could fix that sound issue, I'd give you a 10/10 for this movie.

Responses are always encouraged and appreciated. :)

FettFetterson responds:

I'm gonna work on making better sound in the next one. THanks for the tips!

[Closed for Repairs]

LOL, that's fun.

That's hilarious! Great job, and a great way to tell your visitors that the site was under construction. The graphics and animation were smooth and nicely done, and the sound was hilarious, too. No complaints at all... hope to see more from you on Newgrounds soon!

And yes, I'll check out the new site. :)

(I enjoy reading responses just as much as you enjoy reading reviews! :P)

JKR responds:

(Cool then I guess I better respond! =) )
Anyway, glad you enjoyed the cartoon. Yeah, I'll be sure to submit the next Fred cartoon here on Newgrounds too. And thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

[Prehistorik: Episode 1]

YAY!

I've been waiting for this since I saw the preview, and I wasn't disappointed! Great stuff... funny story line, excellent animation and graphics, and overall a great presentation.

The only things I didn't care for were the voice acting by the cave-chick (who seemed uninterested and bored), and the length... it was just too short. Hopefully the next episodes will be longer.

But, other than that, this was a great start and I'd love to see more! Looking forward to episode two.

(Responses are always encouraged and appreciated!)

EpicPopcorn responds:

Thank you for the kind review! The lenght will vary from episodes but I am planning to make them longer!

[Caveman Bowling]

Heh, another great work.

Another masterpiece from the author of "Imaginary Friend". I expected no less. This was short, but sweet... a great take on a concept that's probably repeated itself in history more times than I care to think. Great artwork, a nice soundtrack that went well with the movie, and simple but effective action.

5/5, but 8/10 because it was a bit short and I think you could have carried the joke just a little further. Otherwise, great job.

(Responses to reviews are always encouraged and appreciated.)

Bad-Atom responds:

Glad you liked it. I kept it short because I hate when people stretch an idea or joke too thin.

[Character Motion Tutorial]

Nice job!

There you go... that's exactly what I was talking about in my review of your other submission! Great job applying your demonstrative skills to something useful. The directions were easy to follow -- although you could have spent a little more time discussing the creation of the character segments themselves -- and the screenshots were appropriate and useful.

My only suggestion would be to offer a "sound off" button, because that music loop got really annoying toward the end of the tutorial. Otherwise, great work, and I can't wait to see what's next!

(As always, responses are appreciated!)

Catjuggler responds:

Thanks for checking this one out, too. You have been really helpful to me! Oh, and a Sound off button would be easy. A definite future update!

[The Story of a Rabbit]

Heh, nice short.

This one cracked me up. The art's not bad; it's a little rough around the edges but it's got a personal feel that I enjoyed. The voices were amusing... I'm assuming you sped those up, yes? Or was that actually Issa's voice? Pretty funny, either way. I do wish it'd been a little longer, but considering that you only put one night's work into this, it's pretty good.

Responses to reviews are always appreciated. :)

[Simple Effects Gallery]

Decent first effort...

It's an okay first flash, but it's really just a demonstration, or maybe even a glorified test. A better way to present this might've been to do it as a tutorial, showing others how you did each effect.

I did like the effects you did, for whatever it's worth, and the soundtrack was nice, too. I think the best of your effects -- or at least the most original -- was the one in the easter egg, actually. Nice job with that... you could build that one into a character and do something with it if you wanted.

Good luck with your future flash work!

(Responses are always appreciated.)

Catjuggler responds:

Thank you for the tips. Funny enough, I have a whole bunch of characters lying around, halfway animated, etc. I was originally going to make a movie with nothing but lamps dancing to techno music with all these crazy things in the background. I am also creating a character motion tutorial for anyone who is interested!

[Old Stick Mov +seizure]

Nice start!

I wish you'd finished this. Well, the stick part of it, at least. The seizure part at the beginning was almost boring; the music dragged it down pretty badly. The stick part was much better. I liked the voice-overs and the action on that section.

Both sections felt very abrupt and unfinished, though, and it was hard for me to give this any kind of a decent score overall because of that. Lots of potential here, though.

2/5, 4/10 because it's incomplete.

Responses to reviews are always appreciated. :)

GuitarBrdArounO responds:

well, I knew I wasnt gonna drag myself to finishing it... Kinda an old project... So I for some reason, added that seizure part...