Suggestions...
I read your response to another review where you said Clock Day is the only time your submissions stand a chance. That's not true, but you have to be willing to work on your skills.
Consider taking some tutorials on Flash. Below that same link you clicked to submit your flash is a little link that says, "LEARN FLASH." Follow that link and you'll find a bunch of tutorials on how to make your animations look and sound good. Do some of those tutorials and your next effort should be a lot better.
Your flash needs a real preloader. On the Newgrounds Flash Portal page, there's a link right below the "Submit" button that says, "GET NG LOADERS N' STUFF!" Click that link to download a .FLA with a preloader in it. Copy and paste the first frame of that into your animation, and you'll have a preloader, complete with a start button.
Your animation was extremely choppy. Consider using motion tweens and increasing your frame rate to make the animation smoother.
The graphics in this movie were poorly done. Consider spending some more time on making your artwork look realistic -- or at least recognizable.
Your game was pretty short. Why not build on it and make it longer and better?
Hope that helps. Good luck with your next flash!