hm.
Great story, but with all due respect, isn't this a tale that could -- and should -- have been told on the forums? A text-based slideshow hardly requires a Flash presentation to be told.
The music was nice, though, and quite appropriate, all things considered. ;) And it really *was* a great tale, sure to go down into the history of great Newgrounds adventures. 'Twas well-written, funny, and definitely worthwhile reading. But... we do have a forum for such things, and a barracks thread in which it would very likely be warmly welcomed.
If you'd animated something to go with this, it would have been a lot better. But, as it is, I can't justify a high vote for this one. Sorry.
(And welcome back.)